It is an awesome soundscape. So far, I can only tell most of people present us the knowledge they learned from the class. You and your partner not only tell the techniques you learned, but also gifted something many people don’t have in their soundscapes, the story. The sound elements you used, which are very different from each other. You have a good use the proximity of heartbeats and whisper sound. The contrast of steady heart beats and the thunder gave me a feeling of distance. The violin is melodic. Your use of violin is beautiful because it unconsciously strengthens my uncomfortable, sad and anxious feeling. I like how you guys add the cops’ car alarm sound. You pause it a little bit but then continues. It is that part of soundscape extremely makes me feel like there is a story in your soundscape. You two are very good at manipulating the space of the soundscape through the volumes of your sounds and different sounds. Also, the violin gives me a sense of movement as well. But I will suggest you guys to increase the thunder sound and have your violin melody right after the shocking thunder sound rather than have these two together. So the thunder sound is breaking the steady and quiet heartbeats sound. A great work!
It is an awesome soundscape. So far, I can only tell most of people present us the knowledge they learned from the class. You and your partner not only tell the techniques you learned, but also gifted something many people don’t have in their soundscapes, the story.
ReplyDeleteThe sound elements you used, which are very different from each other. You have a good use the proximity of heartbeats and whisper sound. The contrast of steady heart beats and the thunder gave me a feeling of distance. The violin is melodic. Your use of violin is beautiful because it unconsciously strengthens my uncomfortable, sad and anxious feeling.
I like how you guys add the cops’ car alarm sound. You pause it a little bit but then continues. It is that part of soundscape extremely makes me feel like there is a story in your soundscape.
You two are very good at manipulating the space of the soundscape through the volumes of your sounds and different sounds. Also, the violin gives me a sense of movement as well.
But I will suggest you guys to increase the thunder sound and have your violin melody right after the shocking thunder sound rather than have these two together. So the thunder sound is breaking the steady and quiet heartbeats sound.
A great work!